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Karin's summer vacation

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I am very happy how this turned out! Karin (aka Rin) in her swimsuit for a fun day of summer vacation. Going to be in AFL at some point but not sure when just yet.

Karin Sohma (aka Rin) (c) me
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Your lighting on Karin is good :) you have an idea of where your light source is coming from, where its hitting her :). What I'd really critique is how you draw lips, its honestly a great trick to use (one that I was told to use when I experienced the same difficulty I'll get an example from my older art :) [link] ) see this, I would do the same as you I would draw the lips. But although it seems easier to do and what have you its better (if you want to add depth) to work with them through shading. You saw my Belle piece? what I did was really define the middle line of the lip (that separates the bottom lip from the upper lip). After that I sculpted and shaped her lips by shading believe me it takes some time to get the hang of it, believe me I know XD it was difficult for me first few run throughs but all it takes is practice and determination. :) With anything in art really :). I think also I'd also work with her right hand the one, I know your trying to draw it based on perspective however I'd try to show that she has other fingers, from this angle that I am looking it it only looks like she has 3. The best thing you can do for yourself is (I usually do this) is take a picture of your own hand, if your attempting different angles try replicating those in the photos you take :) it really HELPS :D

Thats my critique I think your improving, your pieces are getting better :) keep it up ^^